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I recognized both two good points and two improvements from some comments and advice that I got from classmates.

One cogent point was that speaking slowly and clearly was effective to help audiences to understand the contents I wanted to tell. For example, the six classmates wrote my speed of speaking as an excellent point. Second cogent point was that I organized the slides very well. The ten classmates esteemed that point.

On the other hand, the classmates told me two improvements. First the five classmates pointed out that there were too many words on each slide. I should have decreased words on each slide. I am going to improve the skill how to use a picture effectively. Second, a classmate said that if I had more body language my presentation would be better. Fortunately I learned some body languages at CS class. I try to get used to use effective body language.